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Post by Lomelindo on Feb 8, 2006 8:18:01 GMT -5
Heres one dealing with drug addiction and depression...
Take my Life
Within me a feeling grows A feeling unspoken that some may know Pushed away for far too long Returning like lyrics whispering for a song This feeling black overwhelms me What will it take to make me free A shot ? A line? , but Im colder still Will I face what no others will? Or will I fade into the earth Will I ever again await rebirth? Im caught in barren realms of ice Where forever lost seems paradise Blackness swirls furiously in my mind I know my candle again I will find But before that will I survive this strife? Or will I violently take my life?
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Post by Brandybuck on Feb 8, 2006 13:22:35 GMT -5
Once again, you struck a chord within me.
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Post by Shadow on Feb 8, 2006 16:17:46 GMT -5
I have to second with Brandybuck, deffinantly hit one here too. Very nice. -Stitch
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Post by Lomelindo on Feb 18, 2006 8:14:21 GMT -5
Why thank you!!!
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Post by Brandybuck on Feb 18, 2006 14:40:24 GMT -5
Lomelindo just knows how to write for a certain past life of mine. Thats okay..saves me from doing it.
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