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Post by lovemeorhateme on Jun 26, 2006 5:14:57 GMT -5
Loneliness has over come me Nights on end have left me hungery Waiting oh so patiently from the shadows Wanting to see you just one more time No one could ever understand this, This love we share that runs deeper than any ocean We are soulmates seperated by the miles Young hearts and minds with older spirts ment to be together Don't worry, my dear Don't you fret or shed a tear For though the miles are between us Nothing can keep us apart... Soon the mountains will move The oceans shall part Whatever it takes and we will be together...
this is one of my weaker poems but i'm trying...please let me know what you guys think...i'd really like to have some feed back, Thank You
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Post by Shadow on Jun 26, 2006 12:33:05 GMT -5
.... Being in a long distance relationship myself, and knowing what it's like to feel empty night after night... I like it(the poem that is). ;D
-Stitch
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Post by Brandybuck on Jun 27, 2006 15:41:16 GMT -5
I like your poem..if this is one of your weaker ones, I would definitly like to read some of your other work.
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