~Theodora~
Junior Member
May the force be with us...
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chaos
Nov 11, 2005 10:16:57 GMT -5
Post by ~Theodora~ on Nov 11, 2005 10:16:57 GMT -5
These are some thoughts that crossed my mind and I wrote them down in another form. They might seem silly, I hope that u wont think of me that way...
Alice from Wonderland was here... she said hi... The Tiger cried and the Snake was high.
So what are you doing here? The Lost World is gone. Memories are replaced. Lies rule.
The music is louder, the screams sing their song. The door leads to nowhere. In the room is fog.
Love is burried, Revence is burned. The Wolf is dead. Am I right where I stand?
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chaos
Nov 11, 2005 16:05:22 GMT -5
Post by Brandybuck on Nov 11, 2005 16:05:22 GMT -5
No one would ever think you silly for expressing your thoughts..that is what a writing forum is for after all...all thoughts create stories right?
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chaos
Nov 11, 2005 20:03:57 GMT -5
Post by miezekatze on Nov 11, 2005 20:03:57 GMT -5
another good poem. plz keep writing...i like your work alot....it peaks my intrest. I like the way you word your thoughts and such. keep it up hun!
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~Theodora~
Junior Member
May the force be with us...
Posts: 81
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chaos
Nov 12, 2005 2:48:46 GMT -5
Post by ~Theodora~ on Nov 12, 2005 2:48:46 GMT -5
u really like it miezekatze? thanx...
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chaos
Nov 12, 2005 10:47:05 GMT -5
Post by miezekatze on Nov 12, 2005 10:47:05 GMT -5
yep i do! :-) I dunno exactly what it is about the way you express your thoughts but i enjoy it... later... ~*~Britt~*~
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