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Post by miezekatze on Oct 19, 2005 17:00:01 GMT -5
I look out my window I see mountains so blue I just wish you were here to see them too I love you so much I wanna grow old and die with you
You are my sunshine You are the warm breeze kissing my face You are the moonlight peaceful yet strong
I love you and you know it's true I want you here, but what can I do Just don't leave my heart Don't leave my soul behind I yern for you I long for you Please say you feel it too
Now answer me honest and answer me true... Will you always love me, too?
hey this was written when i was in 8th grade to a guy i loved and was with for 3 years before we were finally torn apart...reading over it now i feel stronger for *cough cough* someone...but i believe this question has already been answered by that particular person! (I love you babygirl)
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Post by Laurasia on Oct 19, 2005 17:55:58 GMT -5
Hi Miezekatze. Very nice indeed. I have the same reaction with certain song lyrics. I find that many songs that I have liked since I was younger now carry a different meaning for me. Sincerely, Laurasia
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Post by miezekatze on Oct 19, 2005 20:43:01 GMT -5
Thank you. I look back on all my old poems now and it's just...i don't know what i was thinking but i do know what i was feeling. It's ,i dunno, odd. personally i don't like it but i tend to not like most of my work. especially from when i was younger! i do like this one for some odd reason how ever;
How sweet the sent of a rose How painful the prick of a thorn Though beautiful and filled with grace Still yet not perfect. As i see it Not only beauty But also perfection is in the eye of the beholder. So, thouth they come in many beautiful colors I choose you My simple white rose To me you are all the beauty and perfection I need!
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Post by Shadow on Oct 19, 2005 20:57:10 GMT -5
Hey baby... *pats her on the back* you might want to take something for that cough of yours. You know I will so why do you even ask? Do we need to go over "that night" again?
"You said you'd never give your heart to anyone ever again..... but I think I changed your mind.... Time to forget what he did to you... Leave your painful past behind..."
Yea I remember that. I love you
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Post by twilight on Oct 19, 2005 22:11:17 GMT -5
I love the images in the second stanza of the first poem and in the second one. These were both very enjoyable and effective to read, they sound so passionate.
~Aelish~
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Post by Brandybuck on Oct 19, 2005 22:20:01 GMT -5
I really liked your second poem there, Britt. I wrote a poem once about a dandelion, but I can't remember it now. Darn it! It was really good too. Oh well..
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Post by Laurasia on Oct 19, 2005 22:55:06 GMT -5
Hi Miezekatze.
Yet again, another lovely poem. I really liked that last one too. ;D
Sincerely, Laurasia
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Post by miezekatze on Oct 20, 2005 17:28:41 GMT -5
Hey baby... *pats her on the back* you might want to take something for that cough of yours. You know I will so why do you even ask? Do we need to go over "that night" again? "You said you'd never give your heart to anyone ever again..... but I think I changed your mind.... Time to forget what he did to you... Leave your painful past behind..." Yea I remember that. I love you My cough is just fine thank you.....besides i said that i know the answer to that question anyways! love you baby... Thanx u-guys for all the positive feed back....still it makes me wonder....if I claim to have loved someone so much before and it changed...what about this one? Do all things have to change with the seasons? And if so can we change together,only for the better? ... ok sry (wondering mind) i'll stop now....
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Post by Shadow on Oct 20, 2005 19:00:58 GMT -5
Well Britt, hopefull this love you have now is one that will never change. The only thing I can say to you is go where your heart tells you to... Just remember you always have a place in my heart.
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Post by miezekatze on Oct 20, 2005 19:23:49 GMT -5
Well Britt, hopefull this love you have now is one that will never change. The only thing I can say to you is go where your heart tells you to... Just remember you always have a place in my heart. Don't start talking like that....u make it sound like i wanna leave u....and there isn't a chance in H*** that'll happen(u know that).... i love you
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