Rowan
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Post by Rowan on Aug 13, 2007 12:19:45 GMT -5
Drifting through the downpour , breathing sheets of glistening planes Disappointment sinks when words are trapped encased in silver flames.
An early morning scene of gray captured , standing still . Does walking really soothe the mind or silence out the drill?
Reflected misconceptions , driving downwards soft and hushed, then fading to oblivion , to return in pointless rush. Is there even sense of grasping that I cannot put to words? When I'm wandering for reasons that are not quite understood?
Saturated warmth feels calm , seeping deeper into thoughts Drenching into sadness , exhaustion finds me lost...
Seek comfort in the sound of pounding rain upon the ground. Each passing car ignored as its hurtles , homeward bound. Timeless now , I'm almost home , pure thought in trickling streams I'm hurting , but I don't know why ,just where the feeling leads.
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Post by Laurasia on Aug 14, 2007 8:52:25 GMT -5
I really like this one, sweety. By the way, did you take the accompanying pic?
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Post by Rowan on Aug 16, 2007 6:15:15 GMT -5
cheers Laurasia
No ,I wish I had through. i found it on google images:)
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Post by Brandybuck on Aug 16, 2007 10:30:49 GMT -5
I agree. This one is very nice as well. Keep posting your work luv.
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