~Theodora~
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Post by ~Theodora~ on Dec 11, 2005 6:25:05 GMT -5
Lately I am writing very small poems. I don't even know if I can call them like that. I just write my feelings and thoughts down with a different way. I thought I'd share cuz I don't have anyone else to show them to...so here they are...
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The mirror is lying the crystals are broken the spades attack the bones crack
do u hear something? do u notice it? is it nesessary? get a grip...
Red turnes to white and white turns to black the neck is broken the eyes wip
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U've been away always so fade never there never will be U think that it's right? well u are wrong so **** u I'm loosing control
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I'll wear white at your Funeral... I'll drop a black flower into your grave and three red tears will come out of my eyes... My cry will be a song...the song u wrote for me...
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What if the world was full of flowers? What if the clouds were pink? What if love had another clour? Would u still be black?
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(I've noticed that I use colours very often...I hope that it's not too silly...)
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Post by miezekatze on Dec 11, 2005 14:54:29 GMT -5
I always write long, novel like poems that i wish i could cut off shorter...I think you're writing is unique...especially to others on this site. I really like your work...
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Post by Shadow on Dec 11, 2005 18:21:58 GMT -5
I like them. And there's noting wrong with using colors. Colors are often used to describe a mood or feeling. Keep it up, they're interesting -Stitch
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~Theodora~
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Post by ~Theodora~ on Dec 12, 2005 9:59:27 GMT -5
thank u guys that means really a lot to me... oh and i wrote another one. here it is: Say u have a hidden tear and wip it without fear It's not bad to show u're hurt nor that u collapse on the shore But wait a minute think of it Is it worth it? Is it fair? Can u see, that's an ullusion not true for him just thoughts So keep crying keep thinking of the image u know it won't help but this is how it goes So this poem is rubbish but I don't care cuz these are thoughts and noone listens So thats my way of saying something's wrong...
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Post by Shadow on Dec 12, 2005 11:03:12 GMT -5
Well... what's wrong dear? I'm pretty sure anyone here would be more than willing to listen. If you need anyone I'm here. -Stitch
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Post by miezekatze on Dec 12, 2005 22:15:49 GMT -5
I'm here too and just so you know....I'm not a judgemental person...you can tell/ask me anything...the only other person i might tell is Stitch...she's the only other person I trust besides well...me. If that means anything to you :-) in other words either one of us are willing to listen anytime...
~*~Britt~*~
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~Theodora~
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Post by ~Theodora~ on Dec 13, 2005 9:51:18 GMT -5
yeah i might tell u cuz these days i fell really awful and theres this 'problem' i have with someone and u know...
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Post by miezekatze on Dec 13, 2005 16:21:45 GMT -5
Tell me anytime you're ready...I'd be glad to listen and maybe even be able to help you out with some advice. Just remember i'm here anytime.
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Post by Shadow on Dec 13, 2005 21:11:43 GMT -5
Same applies here Theodora. Anything you tell either miezekatze or myself, I can guarantee it will stay between us. You have my word on that.
-Stitch
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~Theodora~
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Post by ~Theodora~ on Dec 14, 2005 12:42:00 GMT -5
thank u for beeing so nice it help that someone wants to hear u...
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