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Dec 9, 2005 17:02:36 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Dec 9, 2005 17:02:36 GMT -5
Do I break down and cry, to show you I need you? Or do I rip out my heart, to show I'd bleed for you? Do I dare to challenge the one above me, only to be defeated? Or do I keep on pushing to a life never completed? Do I take the pain you bear, just to see you grin? Or do I hand you my soul, so you can see within? Do I stand up and fight for you, to never see you cry? Or do I wait for you, my love, until life passed me by?
This one I wrote a while back, like before this summer. Just one of those feelings of "what more do you want from me? what do I have to do to prove to you?" -Stitch
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Dec 11, 2005 14:49:45 GMT -5
Post by miezekatze on Dec 11, 2005 14:49:45 GMT -5
Wow....I only have one question love....who were you writing about? That has passed through my mind more that once when i was with Chris but i know with u and don't need to ask. love you
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Dec 11, 2005 18:28:13 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Dec 11, 2005 18:28:13 GMT -5
Who was I writing about? That I can't remember. I think it was RRH but I'm not 100% sure. You should never, ever have to ask yourself that with me. I could go into thousands of reasons why, but here isn't the place. Glad you liked it. Love you
-Stitch
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Nov 27, 2006 0:12:27 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Nov 27, 2006 0:12:27 GMT -5
wow... I let one of my good friends at work read this, he sent a reply back to it. I really liked it and wanted to share. He's like my brother so don't take this the way it seems.
No need to cry when you know i wont say bye, i say this without a lie, no need to bleed for i see this is what we both need, for the challenge is made i will be there to stay, take a risk and you will see you get nowhere in life without pushing, the pain we share, for your soul i care, dont worry it's a tear for a tear, the wait is on you for i see your the one i need...
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Dec 1, 2006 22:25:15 GMT -5
Post by Rowan on Dec 1, 2006 22:25:15 GMT -5
Brezo Thats a great compliment for someone to answer your poem with their own. It shows your writing touched them .
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Dec 2, 2006 4:27:52 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Dec 2, 2006 4:27:52 GMT -5
I know, my girlfriend and I do it all the time. We did it here once but the results weren't quite what I'd hoped for. (sorry Laurasia)
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