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Sparrow
Oct 16, 2005 21:59:10 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Oct 16, 2005 21:59:10 GMT -5
In her eyes all you see is pain Tears of sorrow stream down her face A beautiful sparrow caught in a storm Her love so pure Her longing so strong She asks herself, "what else could go wrong?" Night after night When the wind begins to blow She'll go to her room Turn out the lights Remembering when he was in her sight All those nights spent in each other's arms The tears again flow down her cheeks Her beautiful face stained by sorrow She silently contemplates tomorrow If only the storm would end Then she could fly Fly to him But the storm gets rougher The blows get harder She can't take it Not any longer "So she clips her wings Who needs to fly?" She runs to him He holds her tight Then she awakens It was just a dream The tears, once again, flow As the storm gets rougher And the blows get harder She just can't take it Not any longer Still yet she waits for the storm to blow over So she can fly into the arms The arms of her lover....
Another from the love of my life
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Sparrow
Oct 16, 2005 22:41:41 GMT -5
Post by Brandybuck on Oct 16, 2005 22:41:41 GMT -5
Tell Brit that she wrote yet again another beautiful poem. She almost had me in tears with this one. True love is often compared to that of a sparrow and his mate. Sparrows are usually used because they will do just about anything to ensure that themselves and their mates are never parted. It is said that two people who are soulmmates have "discovered the secret of the sparrow." Tell her to definitly hold onto that one...if she ever decides to publish her poetry, this one would really attract attention.
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Sparrow
Oct 16, 2005 23:49:35 GMT -5
Post by Laurasia on Oct 16, 2005 23:49:35 GMT -5
Hi Stitch. Second that. This was a lovely poem. Britt really does express her emotions beautifully. Sincerely, Laurasia
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 5:14:35 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Oct 18, 2005 5:14:35 GMT -5
I wish I had all the litle peoms we would write back and forth at camp over the summer. Hopefully she'll be posting her own work. Laurasia I'll be sure to get in touch with her as soon as possible.
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 14:54:41 GMT -5
Post by Laurasia on Oct 18, 2005 14:54:41 GMT -5
Hi Stitch. That would be great. I'd love to have her here with us. Sincerely, Laurasia
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 21:24:54 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Oct 18, 2005 21:24:54 GMT -5
Well, now that she's here... baby what do you have to say about all this. You think they are stupid but others seem to think different.
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 21:29:59 GMT -5
Post by miezekatze on Oct 18, 2005 21:29:59 GMT -5
Like any writer Babe I'm just never satisfied with my work....I always feel it isn't good enough or could be better. Even Edgar Allen Poe and Franz Kafka wouldn't get any of their writtings published. their friends and family did after they died....I can't help it. It's like with my singing...i chicken out....what if i do that on Grand O'l Operie? anyways i'm not gonna think about it too much...i already can't sleep as it is...love you....
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 21:33:16 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Oct 18, 2005 21:33:16 GMT -5
I still don't see why you chickened out babez?!?!? I love your voice, dag on you know what it does to me *wink wink, nudge nudge, BANG HEAD AGAINST THE WALL* no I can't forget that one. I'm not saitisfied with mine either, but hey, every person is different.
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 21:54:20 GMT -5
Post by miezekatze on Oct 18, 2005 21:54:20 GMT -5
I still don't see why you chickened out babez?!?!? I love your voice, dag on you know what it does to me *wink wink, nudge nudge, BANG HEAD AGAINST THE WALL* no I can't forget that one. I'm not saitisfied with mine either, but hey, every person is different. hmmm...*slams head into a wall*...that didn't help! anyways, I know what it does to you, but i dunno i choke....I'll post some of my poems on here later...love you! :*
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 21:58:34 GMT -5
Post by Laurasia on Oct 18, 2005 21:58:34 GMT -5
Hi Stitch. Don't worry, Brandybuck is the exact same way. All of you writers listen up! YOUR WRITING IS WONDERFUL! Sincerely, Laurasia
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 21:59:37 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Oct 18, 2005 21:59:37 GMT -5
Now baby... I can't hit myself here (Laurasia will get on me) so neither can you! Love you too
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 22:07:05 GMT -5
Post by miezekatze on Oct 18, 2005 22:07:05 GMT -5
Now baby... I can't hit myself here (Laurasia will get on me) so neither can you! Love you too But..but...but you told me to!..he he he...later babe... :* love you
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 22:11:45 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Oct 18, 2005 22:11:45 GMT -5
Ok fine then... evil child... always have to have it your way.... you and your ... stop. You know, someone's going ot yell at us for cluddering up the posts Sorry Laurasia!
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 22:40:40 GMT -5
Post by Brandybuck on Oct 18, 2005 22:40:40 GMT -5
Laurasia,
LOL! When I read Britt's reply, I was going to say exactly this to prove her theory. I guess you do know me very well after all. ;D
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Sparrow
Oct 18, 2005 23:01:32 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Oct 18, 2005 23:01:32 GMT -5
No see Britt likes to take me a bit too literally. "Bite me" ... "ok" *CHOMP* HEY... that hurt. no wait... it was the other way around. Hey Britt remember this one.... "bananas...." NNNOOOOOOOOO *runs to her room* Even then I was still abused by the MD bottle. ;D Thank you for the comment Laurasia. Love you peple!
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