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Post by Shadow on Oct 11, 2005 20:00:54 GMT -5
He holds our hearts in the palm of his hand He sits back and laughs when we can barely stand He fills us with pain of sorrow unbearable Fighting for a love so unmeasurable "Two distant strangers, each from a different state Brought together for love, brought together by fate" "I fell into your eyes only to be cought by your heart" I swear it baby, nothing will tear us apart Time will tell if it's meant to be In the end it'll be you and me Forever and always, together with love You are my angel sent from above Like a guardian of my life you guide me through When I stumble or fall, there to catch me is you Your eyes, your touch, everything about you Yet you ask yourself why I love you? Four months today... still holding strong A love so true, but to others so wrong Why can't it be, for just a minute or two Why can't I be there, for you and only for you? A love undescribable... a love so true Now, forever, baby.... always I'll love you...
I'm going to appolgize for anything I said in that... I've had a lot thrown at me since 7:30-ish. Sorry.....
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Post by Laurasia on Oct 12, 2005 6:48:02 GMT -5
Hi Stitch. Don't apologize sweety! It was beautiful! It came, quite literally, straight from your heart & it's beautiful. I couldn't just start writing like the rest of you. At least not in prose. I'm more of a "rant person" myself. Sincerely, Laurasia
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Matthius
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Great minds think alike, what's yours thinking?
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Post by Matthius on Oct 13, 2005 10:26:51 GMT -5
*smiles* Excellent poem, sounds a bit of it came from pain, I hope you're okay.
Yours truthfully, Matthius
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Post by Shadow on Oct 13, 2005 20:22:05 GMT -5
Hello Matthius. Yes mostly from pain. I miss my baby It seems like everything is against us and nothing is going as planned. Thank you for you concern, and yes I am feeling a lot better. -Stitch
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Post by Brandybuck on Oct 14, 2005 20:14:07 GMT -5
Stitch, It was a beautiful poem! I did feel the pain that you expressed, but I also saw another emotion that is much more obvious..love. I know that you feel like the fates are against you, but if you are patiient, you will prevail! Believe me, I have been where you are, anguished that I couldn't be with my beloved. And I know that it is like living through he** because you cannot see her. The worst part was, my baby only lived 5 miles away, and I still couldn't see her..talk about torture! Then I learned that I had to be patient so that I would not drive myself crazy. I feel that has paid off..now we are 14 years and going strong! Keep you head up and your heart open.
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Post by Shadow on Oct 14, 2005 22:36:50 GMT -5
Hey Brandybuck. Thanks. I just typed what came to mind. Britt said it made her cry. Ok, you and Laurasia's 14 years versus four months. I think you've got us. If she can't get here before Christmas, I'm going to her. 18th birthday and I want to go see her. I WILL find a way to her.... even if it kills me.
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Post by Brandybuck on Oct 15, 2005 17:12:10 GMT -5
When you are 18, go for it!! No one can stop you once you are of age sweetie..see you only have a few more months..you can make it!!
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Post by Shadow on Oct 16, 2005 13:39:43 GMT -5
Hello Brandybuck. All I can do is wait. I asked my dad could I go the Friday before Samhain but he told me no because "it's just too far." 6 hours.... I'm in school longer than 6 hours!!! She wants me to come and I'm trying my best. Even Segio, my ex boyfriend, said when his dad takes his business trip to UT he'd take me. So, hopefully, I'll see her.
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Post by Brandybuck on Oct 16, 2005 19:20:48 GMT -5
I hope that you get to see her too.
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Post by Shadow on Oct 18, 2005 21:27:59 GMT -5
I hope so too. It's driving me crazy not being able to just simply hug her!!!! Is it possible to love someone too much?
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Post by miezekatze on Oct 18, 2005 22:12:51 GMT -5
i don't know if it's possible but if it is....i do...i love you too much Blutengel.....but it's ok....as long as it lasts...i can't wait to hold you in my arms again...just kissing you would be a dream come true right now....
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Post by Shadow on Oct 18, 2005 22:18:29 GMT -5
Hey... why'd you call me that? I though that was only in person Just playing. Love you too mahal
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Post by Brandybuck on Oct 18, 2005 22:41:59 GMT -5
No, I do not think that you can love someone too much. If you can, then I am very guilty of it, and should be locked away.
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Post by Shadow on Oct 18, 2005 22:43:41 GMT -5
Well that's 3 of us that would be locked up... Laurasia how about you?
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Post by Laurasia on Oct 18, 2005 23:49:36 GMT -5
Hi Stitch. I have to plead...guilty as charged. Sincerely, Laurasia
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